March 15, Ijmuiden
Hello Julian,
I have read your website. the design of your website looks very nice, and the subjects are very well organised. But the problem is that you don’t make your assignments. With each assignment just the beginning is made but you don’t finish all of them. The only projects that you have finished are the Sri lanka and the commercial project. I’m going to look at this projects and correct the grammar mistakes. At first, I’m going to look at the Sri Lanka project. In the second sentence of your first e-mail, you can better change the word did into the word had. Also, you use a lot of short sentences, maybe you can make longer sentences by using more commas. It is easier to read a letter with longer sentences, than reading a letter with short sentences.
best regards,
Max
AT 2013 VWO
Dear Robin,
My parents asks me if I would thank you for sending the package to me and for the photos which are added to the package. I would like to know how you are feeling about the changes in your family and about the move to another house. I think that it is a very stressful situation and that I will be very sad because I really don’t like to move. I know that it is hard to live in your situation, maybe there’s an income deficit. And you have to live with some less than normal, so don’t nag to your parents if you don’t get something you want, because your parents can’t do something about there finacial situation. I hope that your dad quickly finds a job! Greet everyone from me, also William and that lovely girl who’s Jamies neighbor, and who stands on all Jamies photos which she sends.
have a nice day!
Max
AT 2015 Havo
Dear Jamie,
How are you? My parents asked me if I would ask you if you want to come to the Netherlands with your whole family for a time. How do you think about that your family moves to the big city? I never want to live in a big city like that because of all the noise and the polluted air. I rather live in a small village. I like playing basketball but I’m not really good at it, I think that I’m a little too short to be a good basketball player. Some advice for Bill, I know you don’t want to move, but maybe the big city is a nice place to live and I think you will really like it there. I wish you all nice holidays, also to that ugly neighbour who is on some of Jamie’s sent pictures while she’s showing a peace sign.
Best regards,
Max
Dear Mr. Rol
Next week we have our trip to Barcelona, I’m really excited to go. We have to be at school on tuesday at half past three in the morning. We fly at six o’clock so that we arrive in Barcelona at eight o’clock. Fortunately I’m not nervous to fly. I only have to take some preperations for the trip, I have to buy a new swimming short, new sunglasses and some new t-shirts. I hope that the weather will be nice at the time we are in Barcelona. The weather forecast says it will be between 19 and 22 degrees celcius, I hope that this forecast is right because I think this is the best weather you can have when you go on a trip to Barcelona. I think it’s gonna be a very fun week!
Best regards,
Max
Dear Mr. Rol
In this letter I’m going to continue talking about Barcelona. A few dats left and we go to Barcelona! I hope we will have a amazing week. We are going to do a lot of things in Barcelona. We are Going to the beach, sagrada famillia, camp nou and a lot of other sights. Only we have to walk a lot and I really don’t looking forward tot that. I’m also very excited about eating in barcelona at the local restaurants. I think that they have really nice food in Barcelona and I want to taste all the delicious spanish food specialties. We overnight at the equity point centric hostel. I don’t know the groups for sleeping in a room, but I hope that I’m in a group with my friends.
Best regards,
Max
Dear Mr. Rol,
This is my last letter, and I was thinking what will be the subject. So I thought maybe it’s a good plan to send a letter about playing guitar. I play guitar for about 2 and a half year. I don’t really know why I began with it, I think it was that I wanted to dosomething new. For how long do you play guitar? and what is the reason you ever started with it? I really like playing guitar, if I’m playing the guitar it really calms me down. I play arround a half hour a day. I’m still not really good at it but I become better each day, It’s nice to see that progression of becoming better. Do you still play guitar often? Also science research shows that playing guitar is good for you and It improves your thinking capability and your concentration ability. Each day I will be better than I ever was.
Best regards,
Max
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